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Precious by Doria-Plume

visually I had to really stare to find what I consider flaw in this great piece of art and still they are small flaws to me. Most of th...

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Precious by Doria-Plume
visually I had to really stare to find what I consider flaw in this great piece of art and still they are small flaws to me. Most of the lines are great. not too thick not too thin. Some of the for me are the lines on the females chest. They V of her neck that meets the collar bone feels pinched and small. Also, the line that defines the outline of her left breast is too far to the viewers right. it should be closer to the zipper. The line should be smaller and the line should be thicker at the zipper and thinner as you get away to reflect that the breast is squeezed under her top and more relaxed for the portion not constricted. Lastly the line for his left shoulder blade is too high.

For originality and impact I feel like I have seen a lot of pictures of lovers holding each other. don't get me wrong I like pictures like that, but I see a lot of them.

I really like the hand drawn look of the piece for the technique. very well done. especially the feathers and the shading on his back.

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UncannyMegan Featured By Owner May 18, 2016  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Thanks for the watch!! Love 
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Thanks for watching my page! :)
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Thanks for the :+devwatch:! :)
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KatrinaDawes Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Hi! I just noticed I never thanked you for watching me, sorry about that. I appreciate it!
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Hey thank you for watching us^^
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Tsuzukikun Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks so much for the watch, darlin'! :heart:
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solalis1226 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011   General Artist
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